After showing the video to my peers and my teachers, they had a few suggestions that I thought were imperative to add to our film. For instance, a teacher of ours suggested that we used an effect that further shows the transition of bodies in our film. We added a almost rainbow-ish color to the transition, so that creates a dizzy effect. We also made our audio a bit clearer. Of fee of peers said that it was hard to hear some of the audio in our clip. The last thing we added was a filter on our blank screens that showed the red text. We felt it was a bit bland the blank screens kind of dulled the movie clips.